Hmmmmm... I wonder what I might be when I grow up? Maybe I might just be an inventor? Or a rock climbing professional? Maybe a teacher at a tree climbing academy? If I am an inventor I will probably work with my friend Ella, with two benches on the wall and six test tubes, a pin board, white lab coats, goggles and a bright red cupboard with deadly poisons in it.
By Phoebe, March 2011
Our trip to the Gardens - March 2011 - This was the start of our inquiry on colour
Fabulous writer's voice Phoebe. I liked the way you started your writing with "hmmm". I wonder what you'll end up being. Do you know when I was your age all I wanted to be was a teacher but it took me about 30 years to make my dream come true and now I think I have the best job in the whole wide world! Good luck with your dreams! Mrs Wood :)
ReplyDeletehey phoebe I loved how you had your feelings at the start & how you described where you will work
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great work!
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Great ideas Phoebe, especially because New Zealand needs more scientists! What I wonder, though, is what the poisons are for?
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