Wednesday, May 4, 2011

My Favourite Shop

Four Square is my favourite shop in the world.  Sometimes my Mum takes me to Four Square and gets me a bubble gum ice block.  It tastes like ice cream blowing everywhere in my mouth.  I love Four Square.
By Jackson
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5 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 8, 2011 at 3:23 PM

    Hey' there buddy! Nice review about the Four Square! I love the Four Square as well! I love the bit of Ice Cream blowing in my mouth! Thats radical! From your buddy Thomas

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  2. AnonymousMay 8, 2011 at 3:23 PM

    I liked how you described what the ice cream tastes like

    (:(:(:!!!ella!!!:):):)

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  3. AnonymousMay 8, 2011 at 3:24 PM

    i ilke the ending. from abbey

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  4. AnonymousMay 8, 2011 at 3:28 PM

    Hi Jackson!I like how you said it was your favourite shop in the world.I like it as well.Ceep up the good work.Harper

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  5. AnonymousJune 24, 2011 at 9:16 PM

    same Olivia

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